Then I tried using your 60 sales hook formula. I struggled at first because I had never used it before and didn’t know if this was even the right place for it. Especially because I had so little room to write. But as I worked through it something “clicked”. The formula suddenly made a lot of sense, and I started to realize how frequently and easily it can be applied.
Anyway here’s what I came up with:
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It’s far from perfect, but more compelling than what I had before. Best part, just writing this first hook transformed the formula from “a cool idea” that I understood “in theory” to being a tool I feel confident using.
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